First Night (More Tiny Moments)

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Open Poetry #26

First Night (More Tiny Moments)

TwoHeartsOnePen
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 60
state of determination

0 posted 2003-05-18 02:05 AM

In order to understand this one, you may have to do a search on the other ones(other parts of the story) If anyone wants the links, please e-mail us. Otherwise...enjoy.
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The a.m. summer air held hands with a salty wind
and it followed us
seemed to be recording every movement of our bodies.
Barely near the car
and we were holding each other again.
We were deciding decadence
whether to find our dreams behind closed eyes
or to walk with the moon until it slept.
We decided to challenge the wear of the day
and found rest in each other's company
on a peir pointing toward dawn.

Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves.

[This message has been edited by TwoHeartsOnePen (05-18-2003 02:06 AM).]

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-05-18 02:47 AM

nice

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-05-18 07:13 AM

Reminds me of memories on the Seal Beach pier...James

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

3 posted 2003-05-18 07:40 AM

This is beautiful. I can almost taste the salty air.

-Patricia

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

4 posted 2003-05-18 01:05 PM

THOP

This is beautiful...the scene and the soft romantic feel you convey.

[This message has been edited by Martie (05-18-2003 01:13 PM).]

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