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Seeds of Love
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Seeds of Love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Seeds of Love A breathing sigh sleeps near by Hair in sweeps pilled pillow high A face of peace relaxed of day Leased into a nights display. How can I enter in her mind? Light a light for her to find Send a message to her thoughts Anchor fancy in my port. What rope of whisper could I vie? To ride the air into her sigh To pluck the strings within her heart To start the music love imparts. To make her dream a wile of tie To take me in her dream of sigh To hold me like a snow white dove And feel the tender of her love What wake of wick should I breathe? To make this trick a true bequeath |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) JUst sow the wild oats in your heart and like goldfinches love will come and grace the flowerbeds you bestow before her! (big hugggsssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Good morning friend and thank you. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Sometimes, a simple touch is all that's needed--especially wrapped in your lovely words!! Enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
oh my gosh! that is SO sweet :-) I think all you would have to do is show her that poem and she would be yours for good LOL Great job!! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Put this wonderful poem under her pillow and let the fragrance of this love enter her heart and her veins ... you know the music of love, dear Seymour! And the touch of the white dove is infinitely tender and fulfilling. Love, Margherita |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A breathing sigh sleeps near by Hair in sweeps pilled pillow high A face of peace relaxed of day Leased into a nights display. ================================== What rope of whisper could I vie? To ride the air into her sigh To pluck the strings within her heart To start the music love imparts. =================================== What wake of wick should I breathe? To make this trick a true bequeath ====================================== me thinks theres gonna be a whole lot of SY-induced-sighing going on in here after reading this oh so lovely poetic sigh on high. Good grief Stinky...hows a girl suppose to breath after reading this rhymed reprieve??? Oh well....breathing is over-rated *wink* *L*  and beyond the beauty of your whispered wish...I am giddy from the internal rhymes in this gem of pen...that first verse alone left me delightfully dizzy.  *ww*   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah how romantic dear Sy! Can you not tell by that slight smile on her face that she is already dreaming of you? Your thoughts are her thoughts.. Tea's on love. ~morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's always lovely to see your heart in spring, to hope that the morn will hear Iz sing... ~*~ Yep...a whole lot of sighs for Sy this beautiful [albeit windy] spring morning... Thank you, my friend! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandpiper I think you are right, thank you. Kristie, You are so sweet, thank you. Margherita I'll try under her pillow, thank you sweet. JM, You know sometimes I think I write just to get your replies. They are the music of my day. WWRS Nancy, Come to think on it there was sort of a smile on her face. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Seymour, you romantic you...  You know that this hopeless romantic absolutely loves this rhyme of love. I know that your lady loves it, too. AAAWWWW, you are so romantic. I'm going to keep this one so that I don't have to look for it through these busy blue pages. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Did I see you smiling in your sleep? Forgive Randy he gets that way sometimes. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oopsy-daisy I forgot to keep it, goofy me  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, You are the dearest, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, you did!  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - this a soft and lovely write for a spring morning. She could only have that smile on her face for you dear poet. Wildberry muffins to-day?! hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you dear, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sweet and romantic this morning Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Never know what I'm gonna write once I start, LOL. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you vandana |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ah, so romantic, who could not love this. Enjoyed greatly, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Sy, Sy, Sy .... how beautiful and loving is this piece? Just a whisper, just a puff of breath in her ear should do it. You are such the wonderful and consistent writer. Hugs for Peace; you bring the Love. Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, So glad you enjoyed. It was nice to write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, A beautiful reply, thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sixty years together and you're still asking??? *S* That may be the answer right there... you're still sowing those seeds. *S* Beautifully romantic! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern You got me there, LOL |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed the write n read,,, |
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