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Open Poetry #26

My True Love

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

0 posted 2003-05-28 04:40 AM

Moonlight Dances
Across tree tops
Lighting up your beauty
As it falls across your face

The reflection of
My true loves face
Taking my breath
Leaving me Breathless

Stars Sparkle
Through darkened sky
Sharing your perfectness
Twinkling in your eyes

The shinning of
My true loves eyes
Drawing me deeper in
Leaving me dizzy

Wind whispers
Over the ground
Gently caressing your scent
Breeze flowing through your hair

The Smell of
My true loves scent
Breathed in to my soul
Leaving me lightheaded

Voice echo's
Towards my ears
Your angelic voice I hear
Speaking through your soft lips

The sound of
My true loves voice
Engulfed into my heart
Leaving me smiling

Leaves crunch
Scattered over the path
Slowly you approach me
Feeling your smooth skin

The touch of
My true loves hands
Felt deep within my cell
Leaving me completed

[This message has been edited by whiskey (05-28-2003 08:58 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-28 04:49 AM

*****The touch of
My true loves hands
Felt deep within my cell
Leaving me completed

the last lines say it all, this is a terrific write!!!!

gMt

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-05-28 07:29 AM

Ahh, this true love of yours inspired you beautifully!
It's a joy to read you.
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-05-28 02:27 PM

Enjoyed...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-05-28 02:35 PM

Very beautiful...
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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