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Open Poetry #26

Don't Let It End

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-05-28 10:01 AM

Don't let the world end It tonight
Don't let the song stop
playing
Let It play
All long the night
The stars seems so bright
Let us pray
tonight
Everything will be alright
Soon
Soon enough love will keep shinning
On us
And show us way
Let the night slowly go by
Let the night slowly go by
Let the day come
Come Into this light
Don't let it end

[This message has been edited by vandana (05-28-2003 02:04 PM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-05-28 10:02 AM

I would hope for you..the feelings and care never end..

nicely done.. I enjoyed

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-05-28 01:35 PM

There are times that I hope a moment will never end...
nice V,

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-05-28 01:43 PM

VanDana~
You sing us so many lovely poetic thoughts~
Ya' just get better and better, dear poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-05-28 01:44 PM

Hello little one...for you? The song will always play...all long the night...

so good to see you here!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-05-28 02:11 PM

As the song says "All night long." James

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

6 posted 2003-05-28 02:17 PM

very nice write

gMt

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