Open Poetry #26 |
Poetry of PASSION --- Coming Home |
Frank Tymon Junior Member
since 2003-05-11
Posts 27California, USA |
COMING HOME The wind was blowing gently through the trees, through the trees, The flag was flying proudly in the breeze, in the breeze The drums were beating slow And bugles soft and low, As our soldiers returned from overseas, from overseas. Except for there's a few, When Taps so gently blew, Will not be coming home from overseas, from overseas. God Keep. Frank Tymon |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is sad yet a beautiful write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
after seeing the special on Bob Hope last night...my thoughts are on all those who lost their lives then...but how at least they were given a happy moment then when he entertained those troops |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The hardest things said the most softly. Well done. This reads like the sound of the song. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sadly Beautiful...it makes the heart weep and cheer at the same time...Tears of joy mingle with tears of sadness...Magnificent.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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VBallNut Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 60Virginia, USA |
Beautiful poem. My brother just came home from Iraq on Monday after being overseas for 9 months. While I am relieved that he is home safe - I have a great sense of pride for what he and his fellow Marines have done for us. I got chills reading your poem - it was wonderful. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Frank...simply and beautifully written. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My eyes sting... So much, in very few lines... Thank you, Frank |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it is almost as if the drums were beating on the repeating words... An honest touching write *s M |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Welcome home, soldiers of America... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson [This message has been edited by El_Campeador (05-28-2003 02:40 PM).] |
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