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Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2003-05-17 02:24 AM

In the light of a distant star

a form...tall in stature, fair
in grace.A shimmering halo
surrounding the shape within
the mist.My heart thumping
wildly, my curiosity aroused.

Who was this mysterious person
in the light?And, why did my heart
know the rightness of this moment?

Euphony of my soul joining
euphony of yours.I only knew you
through the eyes of my spirit...not
by form or face.I was drawn
as though by angels lifting
me upon their wings, setting me
gently down in your path.

Who was I to resist my fate?
How could I deny my destiny?

I reached into the fog and took
your hand in mine.Instant electricity
shared in our touch.Suddenly, there was
no you, no me...only the merging of two.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-05-17 02:28 AM

Who was I to resist my fate?
How could I deny my destiny?

I reached into the fog and took
your hand in mine.Instant electricity
shared in our touch.Suddenly, there was
no you, no me...only the merging of two.

Oh, Ivy rose, I do feel this
with my Honey-Love. Goodness,
this one feels so real to me....

Hugs,
Ethel

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-05-17 03:12 AM

very touching write!!!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Shimlu
Junior Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 11

3 posted 2003-05-17 03:24 AM

Great poem, brings up old emotions for me

. Thanka =)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-05-17 05:57 AM

beautiful writing!

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

5 posted 2003-05-17 12:29 PM

"Suddenly, there was
no you, no me...only the merging of two."

Excellent!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-05-17 12:44 PM

very nicely penned

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-05-17 05:57 PM

Hmmmm, I like the feel of reaching through the fog...and the comfort that you found there.

What a nice picture that paints.

Ivy Rose~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2003-05-17 06:00 PM

Always a pleasure to read your thoughts Ivy.
Very well said. Thanx.

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