Open Poetry #26 |
Walking The Blue......(Phantom Returns) |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Softly shod to slip through blue walls a phantom walks to find anew a poetess in skips and stalls of fluttering heart upon the blue. Tis but the time of silken rhyme to take away the once froze heart. As whispered words are heard sublime and moistened lips await, apart. A trace of nail along the way shall bring to ears a welcome sound as phantom dreams through minds play and sighs are heard in soft resound. For from the sill of window break a whispered word does touch each ear as maidens sleep in dreaming quake of sensual want and streaming tear. Alas, though time is nigh, is not the mome’ to stealth the waiting blue. And as the heart is warm, most hot a fleeting sound now bids adieu. [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-17-2003 04:37 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yep, I remember this ever too well, hey, maybe Startime can fill us in on the latest in this saga! (big hugggssssssss) Maybe since no one lives in the room anymore the walls were painted or plastered over, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shien upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story ***Shakira*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-17-2003 05:17 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Barry~ The truth is hard to swallow, but you write it so smoothly. Loved every verse, this one most of all. For from the sill of window break a whispered word does touch each ear as maidens sleep in dreaming quake of sensual want and streaming tear. It's sighing time...again~ |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Magnu, You are incredible. Enjoyed the read so very much. "Tis but the time of silken rhyme to take away the once froze heart. As whispered words are heard sublime and moistened lips await, apart." SG |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Noah, I just thought I would lighten things up a little with some nostalgic poetry. Blues, thanx bunches for the comments and yep, "It's Sighing Time Again!" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
SG, always enjoy when others enjoy these little tidbits my mind concocts....Don't ask me which way I am headed next.... Not a clue on this end.. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely written this i enjoyied much It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Magnus, your picture and your name evoke a Shakespearean feel, and impression... One can almost hear your voice resonate, as you boldly wax poetic about your tales of woe, and amour... Another sterling piece, Sir Bard... You truly are, “To Be” Richy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Barry a very nice well thought out write. Great application. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Barry! Very much enjoyed the read this evening. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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