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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-05-17 01:58 AM




~**~
Promise
From you to me
That you will  always love
With  everything  that you have
That you will cherish me forevermore
What more could a woman ask for
Than to be loved like this
Sealed with a kiss
Promise
Promise
From me to you
I will give all of me
For the rest of my life to you
I promise to always love and cherish
With you until death do us part
Always be together
Sealed with a kiss
Promise
~**~






[This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-17-2003 02:16 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-05-17 04:27 AM


Very nice words...

Our promise .....that we cant forget

Hugsssssssss

You Are My End Secret Life...
Be Sure That I Can Be always With You...
Through The Distances...
Through Life Troubles...
Me And You Is One...

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2 posted 2003-05-17 04:49 AM


hmmmm   is that promises promises or promise?  oh well as sweetly as it's written it must be promise,,,,

feelings well expressed!!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

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3 posted 2003-05-17 04:53 AM


Ethel:

you are singing now - have you seen this?

What more could a woman ask for
Than to be loved like this
Sealed with a kiss
Promise
Promise
From me to you
I will give all of me
For the rest of my life to you

what a beautiful tune it is . . .
(btw - I'm pretending I didnt notice it was a double richtameter with a beautiful graphic heart either)  
nope - didnt see any of that uhh uh . . .
xxoo

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4 posted 2003-05-17 05:31 AM




Ethel,

Simply beautiful. What Sue said, too.

Heart hugs to you,

Love, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2003-05-17 05:53 AM


oh wow! very cool! very cool!
Nan
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6 posted 2003-05-17 06:53 AM


A lovely and heartfelt promise it is... Very nice, Ethel...
GG
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7 posted 2003-05-17 06:59 AM


awww Ethel,
you've certainly become our love poem and our rictameter favorite! This is beautiful

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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8 posted 2003-05-17 09:59 AM


A beautiful promise.
Eric

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9 posted 2003-05-17 05:02 PM




(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I am soooooo happy you are using those glitter GIFS too like I used for Valentines Day! (kiss on cheek) May you an Gary's promises always be golden, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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