Stand There Silently (Inspired by Poet deVine)

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Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-04-25 12:37 PM

She stood at the foot of my bed
Staring
Watching
Looking to see if I was real
Or if I was a figment of her thoughts
Come to disturb her travels through time
Why did I lay there alone
And why could I not see her thoughts
She had to have wondered about that
Worried that I would break the spell
Cast by those nights of sleepless thoughts
Discussions with myself of her
Dreams of herself with me
Obsessions and crazed beliefs
Pizza and Diet
Turning to meatloaf and pie
Then in an istant she was gone
Did she even exist
Had I been there at all
For now we couldn't know for sure
But we both knew
I would be there when she returned

When the morning cries and you don't know why...

Musicmaker1969

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since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

1 posted 2003-04-25 12:46 PM

I know exactly how this person feels. I have had experiences just like it. Nicely done.

Jesus lives in my heart!
Sheri Welna
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Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-04-25 06:22 PM

nice

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-04-25 06:47 PM

Very well done..and much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JP
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

4 posted 2003-05-17 12:08 PM

Well done.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2003-05-17 01:36 PM

Ringo, why hadn't I seen this one before? You did a great job..this is in reply to my 'museless' ramblings in prose right? Well, you did a great job. And I am glad something I wrote could inspire such a good poem. Thank you.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-05-17 01:56 PM

wonderful write!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2003-05-17 02:04 PM

Well done.
Could see the uncertainty painted within...
TD

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2003-05-17 03:38 PM

nice...YOU

um...blush..

thought I'd stand next to her and check ya out a bit!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-05-17 04:59 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Bradly, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this is sad yet offers hope and assurance that many who feel this sweet sorrow will never let go of what they've been blessed with! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bradly, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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