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Master
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0 posted 2003-05-28 02:50 AM



There was no grief in your eyes.
You ignored my trembling hand.
No, you had no time for goodbyes...
You made passionate love till the end.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-05-28 02:52 AM


sounds like a good thing

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (05-28-2003 02:52 AM).]

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-05-28 09:09 AM


Master~
I feel a heartbeat in this piece~
You are soooooooooooo talented~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-05-28 10:37 AM


no time for goodbyes...just a long hello to last~

nice
M

Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-05-28 10:55 AM



Master...
mesmerizing, this is...

very.


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