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Open Poetry #26

Simple Sins

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-05-28 07:10 AM

While walking with back blocking winds
The swirl that twirls around is simple sins

The desire to be greedily warmer now
This is the starting how of the simple sins.

Wishing for the warmth of gentle touch
That can mean so much for warming soul and skin

There are those that will rent the warming touch
And it will not cost much to feel their warming skin

They will offer all on the cold city street corners
For just a few dollars will commit their simple sin

I walk with beyond them that dwell on cold corners
Letting chill down my collar to chill my blood and skin

Tacking across the street blowing me down the hill
I keep myself the chill and desire not those simple sins.

Gloom

In the Ghazal Format

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-05-28 09:12 AM

nice Ghazal...I think I will attempt one today

and are those sins really that simple...
I wonder

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-28-2003 09:36 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-05-28 10:56 AM

Ok, Professor...

lesson time!

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2003-05-28 11:04 AM

Sin is always simple, it's the aftermath that's hard.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (05-28-2003 11:04 AM).]

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