Open Poetry #26 |
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I Still Miss You So Much Dad |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() Picture by Alan Ayers * * * * They say that time can fly And I guess that is quite true But not a single day goes by When I don't think of you My life has moved along But my memory remains clear In my solitude I imagine That for a moment you are here I have a picture of us two Way back when I was nine We are sitting at the beach Soaking up the warm sunshine I have many treasured memories Of our times spent by the sea A time when there was us But now there is just me I will visit your grave On the thirtieth of May I'll bring a bunch of flowers And for just a while I'll stay I promise I won't cry I know you'd hate to see me sad But it will take a lot of effort For I still miss you so much Dad * * * * "We sat together for hours without saying a single word. Our hearts were so finely tuned to one another that we felt no need to speak." * * * * "Love is the lifeline I cling to when grief threatens to pull me down into eternal darkness." I am in motion |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I know how this is. I feel the same about both my Grandmothers'. Touching poem Sue. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, whenever you write about your Dad, it is always touching. Hugs my friend, Marti |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sue, this was wonderful, I really enjoyed, great memories to share my friend, thank you. Sincerely Rick |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know how much the "missing" is. I try to visit when I can, and with my Mother coming here in June, it will be soon. Hope you are well. M |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Lovely poem... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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