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Open Poetry #26

Without A Proper Goodbye

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-05-16 04:20 AM

Without A Proper Goodbye

Hello,
who is this?
Are you sure that you're
calling the right guy.
Yes, I've been well.
Ever since you left me
without a proper goodbye.

Well, nice talking to you.
But I've met someone new
and now I must say goodbye.
For I know that she
wants to make me happy
and you only wanted to
make me cry.

JamesLee
May15
2003

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-16 04:22 AM

happyness is life!!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-05-16 04:22 AM

this one kinda hurts, I know the feeling

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-05-16 04:47 PM

Thank you QJQ and passing shadows for the nice responses...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-05-16 05:46 PM

James I love this. No room for doubts. Just looking ahead.
Love, Margherita

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-05-16 05:51 PM

Damn James . . .

good for you though
xxoo

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

6 posted 2003-05-16 11:01 PM

James,I enjoyed great write

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2003-05-16 11:03 PM

Surviving in a state of happiness is always the best revenge.

Finely done; thanks for sharing it.

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