Open Poetry #26 |
A Dream On Ruby Slippers |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The heel not too high A pump to keep things straight In bow above to tie May slip the hands of fate And take me yellow road Crowned well the emerald view But clicked in smile bestowed These steps to follow through The shimmer ruby red In ease of rounded toe The sharper knows to dread Around each corner slow And here anticipate The positive conclude As dreams will never wait In slippers to be shoed Copyright Kkh 5/15/03 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
no, they surely will not, ehhh? Nice job Cinderella, Alice and a host of others... love the rhyme and flow...and of course...you always place within a message for us to enjoy.. [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-15-2003 05:16 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Loving this Kathleen! Makes me want to click my heels three times. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a fun read! clicking red heels in time with the rhythm of this post |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
There is, no place like “this” home! TD, say hi to Toto too, for us... Magical! Richy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May I join you?--Grab hold of my wing..."We're off to see the wizard, the wonderful wizard of Oz!"... Enjoyed the inherent message as well. Warm hugs, Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is awesome!! Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kathleen, Smiles and grins... Enjoyed greatly... Hugs, Pat |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I truly don't think Dorothy ever realized just what she wore! Wow! Wonderful! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Think of all the Munchkins you know and let them lead you to your own Emerald City, or maybe Sapphire City in your vision! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully surreal, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you brought me a smile of words~ Thanks M |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kathleen: maybe it is me - but no - dreams are something you MAKE happen . . . nice write xxoo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
sweet..enjoyed If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThisDiamond~ Oh yes, kick up your heels and dream big~ A lovely read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh yeah, I think I forgot one name... perhaps "Dorothy"?? the more I read this, duhhhh...the more I learn.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, this is so beautiful..... especially this part... And here anticipate The positive conclude As dreams will never wait In slippers to be shoed Hugs, Ethel |
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