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Open Poetry #26

Eclipse of Hearts

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-05-16 03:46 AM

Sunny days we have seen many
and had~ many charming nites to
reminisce of~ our love togeather.
As i set sipping my morning brew
and seeing you not here i wonder
if it's just a eclipse~~crossing my
heart~or has darkness set forever.

[This message has been edited by QjQ (05-16-2003 04:32 AM).]

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2003-05-16 04:40 AM

hope it is an eclipse...

nicely written... great analogy

regards
sudhir

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-05-16 05:27 AM

Glenn:

this is . . . just hurts

amazing writing friend
xxoo

Nan

Administrator

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-05-16 09:51 AM

I'm sure it's just an eclipse - with brilliant sunshine imminent...

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

4 posted 2003-05-16 10:15 AM

Glenn, I like the style you used here. I don't know much about the technicalities of poetry

, but it seems that the words are interlocking... The ending of one part seems to be the beginning of the other.

Enjoyed the read...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

5 posted 2003-05-16 10:23 AM

Im thinking someone with a beautiful mind like you would surely be only having an eclipse. May the sunshine throughout your future. Wonderful writing

Julie

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2003-05-17 05:28 PM

Hello Glenn

So much has been said in so few words.
Fabulous!

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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