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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-05-14 10:17 AM


“ONE SUCH AS YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
If I were to kiss you once, and then again,
would your lips want when they touch mine,
loving with passionate desires that tempt,
to make chills run up and down my spine…

Once I knew of ones delicate caresses,
with silk of hair upon a naked chest,
face of tenderness and its subtle charm,
eyes piercing into me, until I was possessed…

To meet you like this, new to last into eternity,
from the ages searched ago, and long before,
my hand I give in the comfort of your need,
to one such as you, one of now, one to adore…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-05-14 10:19 AM


Bill.. tenderly romantic..and subtly erotic... I enjoyed.
Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-05-14 10:23 AM


Romantically beautiful...and softly sensual Bill.
Much enjoyed...
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-05-14 10:34 AM


True bliss is the receiving of such sweet and tender loving in return. May this be so for you...

Love and eternal bliss,
EA

regards2you
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4 posted 2003-05-14 10:37 AM




Bill,

You consistantly write great romantic poems. Sighing here...sounds lovely.

Enjoyed greatly,

Pat

Ivy Rose
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5 posted 2003-05-14 05:26 PM


Bill...Fantastic writing!!! So very romantic; yet seductive at the same time. The images you plant in the mind are mesmerizing. ***Ivy Rose
QjQ
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6 posted 2003-05-14 05:30 PM


a great write!!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2003-05-14 06:04 PM


Pretty write Bill
TD

vandana
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8 posted 2003-05-14 06:19 PM


nice read
Sunkissed
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9 posted 2003-05-14 06:29 PM


This is officially my read for the day, Bill...

Lovely, lovely, lovely!

Sunkissed.

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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Missouri
10 posted 2003-05-14 09:13 PM


Bill,

I have not had the most pleasant day, so I thought I come your way.  I needed some words of beautiful romance...and so here I am...I got my chance.  

Thanks for reminding me there are still men with passion and desire of the heart and can express it so beautifully.

-Patricia  


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11 posted 2003-05-15 09:39 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is beautiful, sweet friend, to one such as you with a sensitive and giving heart you are bound to make your love forever happy, yay, here's angel hugs to one such as you who shines with friendship, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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12 posted 2003-05-16 05:34 AM


Bill:

umm . . . what happened when I was away?
this is on fire
it is beauty
one to adore . . . how lovely
xxoo

Nan
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13 posted 2003-05-16 09:49 AM


You're an incorrigible romantic, BCI...
Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
14 posted 2003-05-17 05:27 PM


Hello Bill

Your words are always so uplifting and so much enjoyed.

"I only wish to be the fountain of love
from which you drink, every drop
promising eternal passion"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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