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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794


0 posted 2003-05-15 10:58 PM


The past is but a second ago,
until tomorrow,
then the past becomes a day ago,
morphing into yesterdays,
and then I wonder,
does it matter if my past
is a second,
or a day,
a year ago?
Or perhaps
an
eternity?
I wonder.

[This message has been edited by Tim (05-15-2003 10:59 PM).]

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-05-16 06:28 AM


Tim:

nice job here

if I wonder too much my head starts to hurt
take it day by day my friend
xxoo

Nan
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2 posted 2003-05-16 08:10 AM


My deliberations and cogitations have surmised that it's all history...
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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3 posted 2003-05-17 06:03 PM


The past often times gets in the way of the present.  Sometimes it is hard to separate the two, if not impossible.....and life goes on!  

What a concept!  

Much enjoyed Tim, you provoked so many good thoughts~

QjQ
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4 posted 2003-05-17 06:11 PM


good writeing

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Martie
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5 posted 2003-05-17 07:23 PM


Tim...I can just picture you scratching your head, sitting in your arm chair...ruminating.


Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2003-05-17 07:26 PM


LOL, I'd talk about living in the moment, but by the time it's outta my mouth, it's already the past!
enjoyed this...AHEM...timely piece

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
7 posted 2003-05-17 09:19 PM


Tim, I enjoyed this read, thank you, the past is but a memory now, one we can not change, we can only try in the seconds before us which will fall as well into eternity.

Sincerely
Rick

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