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Yogi
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since 2001-11-05
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0 posted 2003-05-15 09:22 AM


Glittering sunlight
On a cold winters day
Removes me from this earth
To the heavens and far away
Shadows descend on my mind's eye
For the tears I cry for a lost love
Am I to cry forever, even here?
For each tear is like time it is everlasting
As it takes me further down
In my own hell in side my mind and heart
I can't help wonder if this is what love is about



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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2003-05-15 10:15 AM


My goodness gracious, no! Love is about holding hands and laughing and sunshine and daisies. That other stuff is something else. Toss it. Get back to the daisies, that's where you belong.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-05-17 04:45 PM


There is a time to cry, but love is reaching out for someone to share love with...if you make the wrong connection thats why there's 200 billion people in the world...keep trying...new opportunities daily...not sure how many people are in this world but there's plenty to go around...James
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-05-17 09:18 PM


well, it's one aspect of
love...
but the other aspects are more fun
not to mention they're more comforting

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