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Twilight |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Twilight Here in the twilight of extreme I play the lines of lights that gleam Pluck the notes of gone emotes And listen to the dreams remote. These are times of silent wear Mimes of breathing freedoms air Turning back in pages probe Thrilling kisses upon a lobe. I ghost and host a spirits toast Under a memories candles post Oscillating in the breeze Moments of a lover’s tease Yes, oh yes this can be so Even though my hair shows snow And yellow burns the page with age It’s I that yearns upon this stage. It is the embers glowing bright That keeps me from eternal night |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
It seems to me that the twilight that you speak of would suit me fine even if that were the early morning rays for me... keep the embers burning, my friend nice write...  regards, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, They are the same my friend, thank you. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
seymour, maybe twilight is twice as much light and then its twice bright your words are most welcome, regards, sudhir |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning! Your twilight burns more brightly than the high noons of men half your age!  Lovin' hugs and spring sweet kisses, EA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Yes, oh yes this can be so Even though my hair shows snow And yellow burns the page with age It’s I that yearns upon this stage. It is the embers glowing bright That keeps me from eternal night ==================================== Me thinks its poetic sage upon that page ... and wisdom waltzes with grace across the stage.      |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The embers burning at twilight cast a magnificent glow, dear Sy... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Fan those embers and burn brightly, Sy!!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Life is always worth living when you still have so much to give. Keep up the writing. It has touched so many of us here at PIP. Blessings, El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"It is the embers glowing bright That keeps me from eternal night" Beautiful closing couplet on this lovely piece Sy! How about I keep fanning you to keep those embers burning? Tea's on...I'll pour! My sister will be here shortly with the eats. ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, Flattery will get you everywhere, LOL JM, You are the diva of my fever One that acts a cantilever You are my crowd of lace and grace A cloud of colors holding place I'll write you tonight and finish it. Nan I love you too, scorpio I'll try, thank you. El_Campeador A wonderful reply, thank you. Nancy, You are a love, hugs. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thrilling kisses upon a lobe. Ooh, my Seymour !! Twilight is burning brightly for sure. Love this morning's read. Apple turnovers with tea to-day! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Seymour This was wonderful and so very much enjoyed. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
You are fire in the twilight. Your poems are so passionate and a delight to read. SG |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And to add...Of Mentor's mind... A golden sage... Is you Sir Sy.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you dear, Sue, Nice to hear from you. SimplyGold, And your comments are a pleasure to read. Barry, Thank you my friend. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, we all need embers sometimes, so we can feel the colors through the contrasts! (big hugggssssssss) Much enjoyed this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you Noah always enjoy your comments. |
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