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| Open Poetry #26 |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Execrated Some men you cannot understand, they veil their actions within clouds, tongue at words with deadened sounds, scribble sonnets in furtive codes; Men who recoil from sunrays defenseless in light’s clarity - fearful of barren, mirrored lakes, of naming hatred’s blank face. Some men will never know Zion, they wish to walk the cleft of wind between cosmos and Sheol. © 2003 Core [This message has been edited by Corinne (05-15-2003 07:47 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
a very good write!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh they who walk the dark... Corinne, this is good writing, and something I will be coming back to read again... thank you, yet again! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Corrine, This is so well-written. Oh my...how true it is... Enjoyed, Pat  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well and truly written though I don't think the concept is gender specific. I do however understand the context, and were the shoe on the other foot (mine), I'd surely have written it about...some women (hee, hee). Very well written ... enjoyed it much. jwesley |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Most men I cannot understand... Still looking for the instruction booklet... I enjoyed this Corinne...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
smiling at Nan...I have only understood one man in my life...and even that has changed. M |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, everyone. Continuing my rant from yesterday. Ran across a poet posting anti-semitic poetry on another board. I'm not Jewish - (Irish Catholic), but found his hate-poetry so offensive that it's made me angry. Ugh. Cor |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Agreed, and to hide behind those words..its this subversive hatred that destoys whatever is left of humanity |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Corinne, if I ever lie or do something like that, which I never want to do, you have the right to slap me in the face as hard as possible! (wipes tears) That is disgusting and I hope now all of once were his fans break away from him and leave him cold and alone, liars and hypocrites are the worst people in the world, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
WOW! This is wonderful. Thanks Cor |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
After reading several comments....a light finally came on.... duhhh.... just digging through the mail.... Ya said it well Cor. |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
zion,are we sleeping awake |
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