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Open Poetry #26

The Parts In Disagree

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-05-13 10:46 PM

The sun, sets slow in peaceable deliberation
A crimson aura slips by silhouetted spring migration
And yet the calm is merely for the rest of will
For inside finds this transitory swirl a renegade trill

My heart speaks muted tones of fire and ice
A pinnacle conversation in the power times thrice
Debated by the mind to blisters on the palms of right
For inside of this universe submits a yearning might

The unallocated switch cannot be found to quell
A crimson aura found around the bucket at the well
And yet to dip into the thirst could only burn so far
For inside finds the plenty of how missed you truly are

Copyright Kkh 5/13/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (05-14-2003 04:53 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-13 10:49 PM

very nice thoughts

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-06-09 09:17 PM

One comment to something this elegant is
a travesty... BUMP!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2003-06-09 09:24 PM

Very nice indeed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

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