Open Poetry #26 |
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sympathy, apathy, agony |
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j-oh-E Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 59Texas, USA |
In a church, Prayer is the silenced prose Of the chambered walls, Where a faceless choir sings a song of cold stone And dead wood sculptures, As a tapestry of the echoed Monoliths combine As a congress of weak voices. I'm in pain. It's sympathy for the shards of light Reflected in glass windows Resurrected in time, Until the songs fade. |
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j-oh-E Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 59Texas, USA |
Hey people. I haven't been online in awhile. Just wanted to share what I've been working on. Let me know how it sounds so far. Does it make sense? This was my experience in a church. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I had to read this one twice. It's complex, and I like that. I can't do it myself, but I like reading it when others do. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
interesting thoughts!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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