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Open Poetry #26
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Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23
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california
0 posted 2003-05-13 07:45 PM


Adam


Skies intense, heat up from cool
He ate the fruit, what a fool
Dimensions clash, in rebel actions
Sin lured in, by evil attractions
Casting climates, a silhouette of anger
From once a companion, to now a stranger
Banished souls linger, in unguided times
Faith grows smaller, from ancient crimes
Praying to ears, impervious to all
Disobedient man, now waits for the fall


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1 posted 2003-05-13 10:57 PM

Hard hitting...
Worked well in the graceful and punctual timing!
Applause.
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2003-05-14 01:18 AM

Joe, you told the story very well.
I enjoyed reading this.
Hugs,  
Ethel
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