Open Poetry #26 |
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Heart Sounds...............Rictameter |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA ![]() |
![]() Webshots **~** The beat of our two hearts is in perfect rhythm Beating separately........in sync Our hearts are so bonded they are as one Space between makes no difference We are never apart We always feel The beat **~** [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-12-2003 01:03 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write and pic!!!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
QjQ, thank you. I appreciate that. ![]() "To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful Ethel, as always |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, I'm glad that you liked it. Hugs, Ethel |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ok...This one really speaks to me!!! I know of these types of connections with someone!!!! No matter the distance they are there!!!! I love rictameters and what you did with this one!!!! Enjoyed!!!!! Bridgette ![]() "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Bridgette. I love rictameters, too. They are so much fun to do. I just wish that I could learn to rhyme them and still get my thoughts across. Hugs, Ethel ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethel... you can do it... the rhyming part I mean... I know you can.... Just try |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, thanks for the vote of confidence. I've tried some, but not really hard. It's just so much easier without rhyming. But, I think that I will like the finished results if I will just do it. Thanks. ![]() Hugs, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That was neat!--and I liked the beat! ![]() Warm hugs, Linda |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Linda. I like the beat, too. ![]() Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-12-2003 11:32 PM).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I love this - Perfect picture too! ![]() Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
And the beat goes one... Nice, Ethel... ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Melissa. I'm glad that you like it. ![]() . . Yep, Nan, the beat goes on. LOL Thanks for your reply. ![]() . . Hugs to you both, Ethel |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you very much, Eric. I'm glad that you like it. "To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful poem that made me cry in joy imagining my dream girls heart beating to mine! (kiss on cheek) The picture is sooooooo adorable just like your words, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful ehart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
A little mushy for my taste but I actually liked it....very nice Joe |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Mine makes more of a crackle like broken glass..then goes dead for a few seconds.. that's healthy right? |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, thank you for your sweet reply! ![]() . . Joe, I'm glad that you liked it, even though it was mushy. LOL ![]() . . Raph, just what are we going to do with you? LOL By the way, Gary makes my heart skip a beat lots of times, even though his skips at the same time. So, they are still in sync. ![]() . . Heart hugs to you all, Ethel |
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