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Dance
Junior Member
since 2003-03-28
Posts 34


0 posted 2003-05-13 06:45 PM



My Heart! My Dear!
Oh,Oh so near!
I know you love,
I from above!
Just follow my head,
Let all of the Memories become Dead!

Don't stir to Life all I remember,
Let them become gone as an Ember.
Forget as much I know,
Please fill my heart with cold, hard, snow!

Can't lift my head to see the eyes,
The eyes filled with tears, love, despise.
Oh Heart!
Can't you heal as my mind races?
Please, why can't you just take and embrace?
Get over Him, as I have.
But,then again,
I might go MAD!!!!!

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2003-06-10 04:48 PM


Lots of internal conflict presented in this piece. I have to say the wording is intense.
Good work.

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