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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Jigsaw zig zag rough cut watch the blade band saw circular sun cut me please until I become puzzle pieces made of clay scattered to be gathered whole one day |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Hi sue. I know of this.  [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (04-16-2003 09:18 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May the pieces be gathered pronto! A real sharp edge to this poem! Sort of a Humpty Dumpty feel to it--only much starker. PS Where's your photo? I miss seeing your magnanimous smile! May tomorrow be a better day, Dear One! Warm, loving hugs, EA |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
you described me - just a few pieces missing or marred - between dogs, kids, & women lol seriously though - from reading your poetry - it is a masterpiece in the making amazing write - look forward to more & ps ... wheres that beautiful pic - it used to brighten my day . . . all that we see is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I agree with dreambuilder, a masterpiece in the making I'd love to see complete |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
smile.... breathe...... this is terse.....tense and well said you are stretching... shatter and remade...yes this is sooo good |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I like the honesty with which you write. I can feel your words when I read. Best wishes, little one.  Heart Hugs, Ethel (Pssstt!! i miss the picture, too. Where is it?) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Rose - Thank you - I needed that hug EA - I'm a trying to get that puzzle together - what a nice thing to say about my smile - as for the px - well . . . TY dream - what sweet words you have for me - TY and I didnt realize that could brightened someones' day . . . glad it did Raph - you have helped to complete a lot of that you know . . . sweet words for me . . . thank you (you do agree with ALL of what dream says right lol) *smile* Bri - from you - I am so pleased with myself then . . . stretching yes - needing to be brought back . . . thank you Ethel: heheh little one - I like that and am glad I make you feel - always from my heart they are and so sweet - a kiss on the cheek up there - just what I needed. Wow - you miss my picture too - well . . . Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-17-2003 06:05 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfect! I understand completely Sue |
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Zip zap great read! |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
bump - bump |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
words as cutting as the blade! well done! ~Talia |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Sharp write - most enjoyable and cleverly presented. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Dixie - always need you here . . . Sun and Dream - thank you so very much! thanks for the bump dream Talia & Spirit - hehe nice replies Thank you guys for reading xxoo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
I think I shall make it a point to read more of your work, Littlewing! enjoyed. Sunkissed. |
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silvergriffinfire Junior Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 21middle of nowhere |
i liked it alot - off to read more of yours Descendus Averno Facillis Est |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
vandana Sun and Griffin - thank you so much - too good to me xxoo |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
This is amazing, I can't put into words how much I loved this I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks KoKo - xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
pick me up, put me back together,,,,,,,,, it all comes and goes....... one day at a time, yes, if only, ........thanks, missed you, too over here |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Michele - you got it missed you too xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I have felt broken like this before and believe there is no more rewarding feeling than seeing someone have the heart to kneel down and put you back together again! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is very impressive. As sharp as the blades. Thank you for waking me up when all I wanted to do was sleep. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Seems like you described us all at one time or another...well done. Hoope you get things together soon.  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You are probably going to think me crazy but I skip for exercise and wrote this down and and going to use it to skip to, if I say it over and over as a type of mantra, it may remind me never to become so weak as to let anyone fracture me every again! Can you tell I love this  I do! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah - dry those tears please TY Ice - did you want to sleep? lol - very cool - I opened your eyes a bit? Sky - Im ok - now I am - I think . . . Mysteria - very cool and no I dont think its weird . . . ( backing away slowly) lol thanks guys xxoo |
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