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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-06-07 10:29 PM


Our love is strong
Never shall it be broken
Till death do us part


Cold hands means a warm heart

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-07 10:45 PM


terrific write with just a few words,,

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

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2 posted 2003-06-07 10:53 PM


As short as my memory and as sweet as your heart. You have real talent Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
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3 posted 2003-06-07 11:36 PM


Julie, this is very sweet!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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4 posted 2003-06-07 11:43 PM


Julie, this is wonderful.

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
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5 posted 2003-06-08 12:53 PM


You said a lot in that poem with so few words Julie, very nice.
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6 posted 2003-06-08 04:05 AM


short and sweet
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