The End (second try at lyrical song)

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Open Poetry #26

The End (second try at lyrical song)

HardHitter
Junior Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 23

0 posted 2003-06-01 03:38 PM

(It has begun)... where everyone says what they want me to be,
but they don't understand that I do not hold the key.
(I am the son)... of this Apocalypse,
taking back what was yours, I'm ganna come out ontop of this.
(The right to breath)... out this pain thats been sunken within,
this is the time, right now, it's time to begin.

(Chorus)
So why, why do I feel this pain, what do I have to gain,
So why, why does it end this way, why's it gotta be today.
When it all comes to an end, all the pain I'll send,
why is it gotta end.

(Time ticks away)... as I'm wasting this ink,
spending the time as I'm trying to think.
(About the times)... of our past living memories,
how is it now that we are enemies.
(Something to do)... is think back of how our lives have been,
and readjust the hands and start over again.

So why, why do I feel this pain, what do I have to gain,
So why, why does it end this way, why's it gotta be today.
When it all comes to an end, all the pain I'll send,
why is it gotta end.

(It's time to end)... the path that we held together,
time to pull these strings to this rusty lever.
(As we fall down)... to the ground, where we started as seeds,
and now we have matured into two struggling weeds.
(This is goodbye)... for the last time, I mean it for sure,
I will never see you again, I have found my cure.

So why, why do I feel this pain, what do I have to gain,
So why, why does it end this way, why's it gotta be today.
When it all comes to an end, all the pain I'll send,
why is it gotta end.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-06-01 03:44 PM

Brian:

sorry I missed your entrance
Welcome to PIP!

Man you echoed my life here:

(It's time to end)... the path that we held together,
time to pull these strings to this rusty lever.
(As we fall down)... to the ground, where we started as seeds,
and now we have matured into two struggling weeds.

you have yourself a song, my friend
and a beautiful one at that - even in its pain - sometimes thats what brings out the beauty . . .
nice write
xxoo

HardHitter
Junior Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 23

2 posted 2003-06-01 08:05 PM

Thanks, I'm glad that you liked my song. Hopefully I can create some more that people experience the same feelings, yet cannot find the words to express them.

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