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Walking With the Dead (senryu)
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Walking With the Dead (senryu) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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I walk with the dead empty shells of what we were ghosts, we haunt ourselves [This message has been edited by Aenimal (05-12-2003 02:35 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That was incredibly chilling to the bone! I'd say it's time to get some friends that still belong to the land of the living! Sending you lots of healing Light, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (05-12-2003 03:36 PM).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A haiku that I can truly relate to.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh my, I like it. Hope that was a then, here a now for ya.... Walk with the loving Look into my mirrored eyes See strength and wisdom Hugs you, Pat/Trish  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good Lord - we do - dont we? *sitting here in a haze feeling . . . lost* awesome wrting yet again as always amazing xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
happy haunting, Raph apparitions tell stories, recite poetry  guess who made me do it |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Be careful Raph, your senryu is getting almost as good as some of my chillig poetry. Maybe better? |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Damn yet again! Raph, you are way too good at expressing yourself. Never stop writing and this is a hauntingly beautiful senryu. I'm saving it~ Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this reads so poignant and sad...made me wonder if i am like that actually, just living a lie? |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
OOOOHHHH, that's scary, Raph.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
true, so true...God, you have a way with words that I really appreciate |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Linda living isn't simply breathing and there's alot of people out there walking dead Thanks justbleu senryu though, haiku's deal with nature someone taught me this but i forget now Pat i like yours better hopefully one day Sue hugs i know you know Kacy always make me smile thanks Magnus thanks for the compliment your poetry is in a league of its own Thanks Melissa see how can i stop writing when i have a manger who pushes like you..grin Kaile am i alive or am i a lie, i wrote that in one of my archived poems methinks.. Ethel you talking about my face? yeah you're right..oh the poem..oops Dixie thanks for always reading and bumping those words for me  |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I can relate to this I have a past that haunts me daily & a future that screams for me to wake up & often, I too feel surrounded by people who have given up on life & are just waiting to be buried excellent write my friend . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
So true your words Raph. enjoyed. Maree |
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