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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-05-27 11:40 PM

Stay

you
are somewhere
out there
waiting
for my love
letting
your eyes
touch tender
where I feel
your heart
in pulse
knowing
I would have
your kisses
tomorrow
where
no doors
close
and I don’t
have to say
stay

"no one defines me, but...me"

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-05-27 11:42 PM

This is so true. I loved your words.

Cold hands means a warm heart

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-05-27 11:47 PM

But the door swings both ways, doesn't it?
You read so well in short verses slick one.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2003-05-28 12:08 PM

And you wonder why I'm one of your biggest fans?

An amazing write...I just love it and relate.
Yet another keeper~

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-05-28 09:00 AM

How you place
each word
just so,
impacting it's meaning
as a one word
sentence.

Well done, Helen...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-05-28 10:38 AM

wouldnt that be nice...

M

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

6 posted 2003-05-28 11:06 AM

I never even have the chance to say stay, the leaving is always so quick....

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-05-28 05:09 PM

nice write

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-05-28 05:26 PM

...mmmm...this a nice little fortune cookie for some lucky fella.....

Pretty -- like it much!

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______________Ratleader______________

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

9 posted 2003-05-28 06:16 PM

We should never have to ask them to stay
should we?
I love the way you say things, Lady Helen.
You are an inspiration to me.

and?

Thanks for the e-mail..I will get to answering it soon.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

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