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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now 
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linen white is perceived as crisp innocence giving the hand a tactile sense to gently touch without penetration linen is natural light shades of pale caressed with panting breaths of color to mark a degree of difference with freedom from dilution of white she is strengthened and willing to sow linseeds of love anxious to verge offering warmth to freely explore above fabrics of truths that might take place below that which can not or will not then pieces of consummated threads become tangled with circumstances weaving a non penetrable cloth leaving impressions scarred on the white imprinted signs left to remind a fading memory for all time Janette |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janette Well done, a very nice write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
soft, multi-textured, crisp originality good to see you posting here, Janette  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow, very good, glad to read this |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . .now this, this is well done. . . this image just formed in my mind as I read it Janette. . . how linen begins as white. . . until. . . really well done. . .  --------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wow!!!! This was very well written!!!! Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Thank you all for your much welcomed comments. My muse has been sadly missing for several months. I am now learning that inspiration is everywhere if one only looks and sees. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Janette, this is a wonderful write. It is good to read your words again. alan |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Thank you Alan and it is great to read you again, too, dear friend. We all need a little "color" added into our lives ... oh indeed we do ... and from your recent piece it appears you are finding rainbows ... that is so good to know. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I only wish the tapestry could be as clear as porcelain sometimes, but then again, porcelain is scratched on the surface so indeed there is a scar in everything but the vein can always succeed with comeliness! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderfully introspective, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Janette, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hi Hi, Lady. I read this and didn't comment on it yet. Bad me. Its lovely. You have such an amazing intelligence and passion that comes through in your work. I love having you here in Open, and I hope you are here more often in the future. Beautifully done. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Noah - hugggsss back at you dear friend and thank you again for your recent help and for reading me. Temptress - thank you for taking the time to comment on this one, I appreciate the read and your friendship. |
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