Open Poetry #26 |
Failure |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
What then when words fail? Were you a lover a touch or gaze would be enough for you to understand Were you an enemy I'd pound the message on your skull like morse until the point sunk in But you are neither and words have failed What then? Silence.. Cya [This message has been edited by Aenimal (05-28-2003 01:59 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Strange... it is so quiet as I read this... silence all around me... yet, I heard you. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Sometimes it's time for silence. Words, upon words, upon words said into air, are unheard. The silence then speaks.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think I know you better than that. You are too stubborn to give up so easily. (like me! ) Hugs Raph. We are still in the shadow of the retrograde renagade mercury.... next week will be just groovy! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
When words fail all we are left are the fates. Good write |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph: you know we just discussed this in my H/R course yesterday - how without words - we fail to communicate - even through universal gestures - but here - it is impossible to get through sometimes by typing . . . even in person sometimes too I know this well I do and you have accurately described the entire net to me in your lines above - is what it means to me anyhow Amazing as always Raph and ummm . . . your not goin anywhere MR uh huh nope xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-28-2003 04:00 PM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Pretty powerful m'friend. and don't give up ok because that wouldn't be you. hugs Sir Raph Maree. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
There really is no success like failure. Well written. Thank you for sharing it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stuck in the middle silent |
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