Open Poetry #26 |
A Dream |
Athi New Member
since 2003-05-02
Posts 5KL, Malaysia |
Close your eyes and go beyond this world Behind the eyes, there lies a world only for those who dream It’s a place where you can be what you want to be It’s a place where you can have all the things that you dreamt It’s a place where you can always get back Just by a blink of an eye Yea, it’s a dream, Yet so real, making me realize, this is my chance to live it As I lie in my bed I think back of the dream I had just now Thinking how it would be like to spend my entire life in a dream People may think of me as crazy But who cares, Little do they know that they are also living in a dream And a day will come, when they will go back to sleep A painful sleep, And with a sudden call they will wake up, Realizing how they’ve wasted their chance It’s no more a dream now, But an eternal life, a life where there’s no turning back A life where you’re judged on how you lived your dream. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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wonderful piece! very wise words...I enjoyed this very much |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
It's strange how dreams are. They can be a figment of your imagination, but magically they can come alive as a result of one following their dream to reality. Good job. quatro |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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"But an eternal life, a life where there’s no turning back A life where you’re judged on how you lived your dream." that says so much! nice, very nice! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I thought we lost this one...whew! |
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Athi New Member
since 2003-05-02
Posts 5KL, Malaysia |
thanx to u passing shadows.. keeps me going in this place hehe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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