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dani Junior Member
since 2003-05-10
Posts 46 |
they're left alone but neither moan they promised they wouldn't but keep it they couldn't suddenly his mouth finds hers his actions say more than words their hands are feeling their minds are seeing seeing what'll come of this why can't they just forget that kiss why do they carry on the feelings there are just to strong it is iver all too fast their content will never last too much stuff stands in their way so they'll wait for another day another day to be left alone next time maybe they'll have grown grown out of this stupid phase stopped listening in a haze she'll return to sitting by herself and yet again she'll be put on the shelf i'll live a lie until i die or until you work out why |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well, I don't understand this but I sure liked all the images and how they stimulate the mind. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Passion was never meant to be controlled. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Welcome To Passions!!!!Hope you enjoy it here..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I know you will love it here. Enjoyed your first post. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to passions...wonderful poem.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome. Enjoyed this poem of passion and want, and hope to read more from you. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) Passion is what fuels all things in life, and I think sometimes people take for granted especially how we live by these necessities! This is a powerful debut, sweet friend, I hope all is well with you! Welcome to Passions, sweet Dani, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dani, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions! I"m looking forward to more of your writing! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, passion can be a storm...with lulls where one is on the shelf of life... Welcome to Passions, please enjoy your stay. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dani: Welcome to PIP! You will love it here nice job xxoo |
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dani Junior Member
since 2003-05-10
Posts 46 |
thank you for making me feel so welcome that poem was written from my own experiences so thank you for being so kind |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the ones from experience are the best I think...keep up the good work |
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