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Enchanting Blue Eyes
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Enchanting Blue Eyes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“ENCHANTING BLUE EYES” by Bill Charles ~~~~ As you lie gracefully, and close by my side, my eyes perceive you only as I do, I see a delicate angel somewhere from the stars, with those enchanting eyes, of tantalizing blue... Reminds me of precious diamonds sparkling in the sun, I don’t know how I’m so enticed, when near, or apart, for when they stare at me they go from front to back, like an arrow that went, all the way through my heart... Heaven they were made in with colors of the sky, always gently compelling, and continuing to sustain, piercing they are, a different blue when I touch, presenting this most seductive look, which I surely can’t explain... Various shades of blue, the magic of their beauty, captivated am I, for this is what they do, knowing you is precious, blindness won’t stop me, from my ever seeing, another loving look from you... I stare into and see all of my sorrow that’s passed, as they talk to me with their love and devotion, the future I then see, and a smile lights my face, for the deepness of your eyes, is my abdication... When I’m with you and near I think of no other, there is no one that comes close to cloud my mind, for your eyes of such loveliness would I ever wander, over time and space, would eternity be so kind... My soul is hypnotized, and senses are enraptured, by their unique softness, yet they’re so very sublime, they draw me closer to you into a tight embrace, and they do this to me, all of the time... Tenderness is your beauty, it comes from deep within, my passions you have captured, and I know of no cure, you are the most sensuous woman I have ever known, with the charm and allure, of your enchanting blue eyes... ~~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (05-11-2003 01:17 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ah dear Bill those blue eyes really hold a spell on you! So beautifully romantic and so full of gratitude and adoration! Love, Margherita  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sensually captivating....filled with the all the love that fills your heart....She inspires you endlessly so for her all who read your words are greatful... |
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Frank Tymon Junior Member
since 2003-05-11
Posts 27California, USA |
Enchanting blue eyes. To have experienced them is, I suspect, to have lived. One day I'll post "Lovely, Lonesome Eyes," that parallel ( I fear, less well) the thought expressed here. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Simply spellbinding!!!! An excellent read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Your best yet Bill... Lucky lady she is...my eyes are green! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lucky is she with the eyes of blue that you adore! --Oh, I have blue eyes!--but alas, they are aqua blue, not baby blue...  She is the envy of many of your avid readers! Have a glorious day--and night! EA |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bill, Well, drats, here I sit with green eyes and do I feel envious... grins Lovely, lovely poem. Romantic as ever. Hugs, Pat |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Did she read this, well she should. Good write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, must be read....by the author...as he gazes into those blues.. Nicely done BC.. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh Bill. This was unbelievable. You really did it this time. I hope her baby blues always do this for you. Hey, go to her now, look in her eyes and write another poem for me, please! -Patricia |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I have blue eyes too and in my dreams I dream my girl usually has Spanish eyes that are like chocolate or mocha! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, may your blue-eyed love dove always bring joy to your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shien upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a piece! wonderful job! I like this style of you |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Familiarly Enchanting, dear BCI... |
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