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inspiredpoetwriter
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0 posted 2003-05-10 02:29 PM


5-9-03


We as poet's write from our heart's
Write whats inside,never letting the poem
Truthfuly die give it spice,give it a name
Give it what you as a writer think it should have.

Our words; a sacred promise-
Tell truths and hide lies.
For you, we'll unfold a deep story,
And you must find the dark secret.

Give us a pen and paper wil write
The story of our lives,loves,
Secreats,sorrow,pain and punishment
We as poets have to be strong for those
Who arn't lift him or her up when they have
Fallen.

The words are a guide,
The stories a lesson
Embrace what your eyes unfold
But do not be fooled.

Wicked,twisted unsure words
Like a black bird with a curse
Casting a spell, dont let us poets
Bring you down just when done reading it
Leave with a smile and not a frown.

Words are just words,
Stories are simply memories.
But life is a fountain,
And you must drink to enrich your soul.

We as a poets leave u with tears,filled with love
Sometime even laughter and rememberance of many who
Are still loved, candles burn but we still write
We dont need very much light it all comes from
inside deep down like a song,a fairytail,the shining of
The moonlight.

We'll shed light upon your footsteps,
But we can only shine so far.
Words are just a mystery,
For you to uncover.
We write to be discovered-
And yet to hide tales of our own.

Still have the meaning of life to understand
That one we as poets may never figure out
Life is truly a mystrey our poetry goes
In to the times of ancient history.

©Care & Sabrina "03"


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1 posted 2003-05-10 02:36 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, this is a beautiful duet, sweet friends, I would have never thought of that awesome title, and may you always aoar the wing of the blackbird and feel the flight of all the songbirds and soar to so many more poetic realms to come! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-05-10 07:58 PM


nice thoughts

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Startime55
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3 posted 2003-05-10 08:29 PM


Words are extremely powerful and when heartfelt they can touch the soul deeply...This poem writes much truth....

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2003-05-10 09:25 PM


inspiredpoetwriter - I like your writing, but I don't believe that we hide our tales. Perhaps I'm misunderstanding this...

BC

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