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rkcraig
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0 posted 2003-05-05 02:39 AM



Watching your joy
overlooking from the shadows;
faces, glances, smiles; pass
overlooking from the shadows
stepping out my
eyes burn
realizing it is not
my turn
I return to the
shadows.

© Copyright 2003 James Ian Craig - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-05-05 03:10 AM



. . . all in due time James . . .

this is amazing
xxoo

Justbleu
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2 posted 2003-05-05 11:33 AM


I really enjoyed this piece.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


rosepetals25
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3 posted 2003-05-05 11:55 AM


I know this feeling well, but trust, your time is coming Mine finally did.

Tara

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4 posted 2003-05-06 11:31 AM


eyes burn
realizing it is not
my turn

And wondering if it ever will be... I know this well. *S* Great write!

Decaflame
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5 posted 2003-05-06 04:36 PM


Nor mine...
thank you, RK

Lost_Soul
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6 posted 2003-05-07 06:09 PM


Your time will come sooner or later. Great poem.
passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-05-25 04:27 AM


well done
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