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Open Poetry #26

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rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-05-05 02:39 AM

Watching your joy
overlooking from the shadows;
faces, glances, smiles; pass
overlooking from the shadows
stepping out my
eyes burn
realizing it is not
my turn
I return to the
shadows.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-05-05 03:10 AM

. . . all in due time James . . .

this is amazing
xxoo

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2003-05-05 11:33 AM

I really enjoyed this piece.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

3 posted 2003-05-05 11:55 AM

I know this feeling well, but trust, your time is coming

Mine finally did.

Tara

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2003-05-06 11:31 AM

eyes burn
realizing it is not
my turn

And wondering if it ever will be... I know this well. *S* Great write!

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

5 posted 2003-05-06 04:36 PM

Nor mine...
thank you, RK

Lost_Soul
Junior Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 37
California, United States

6 posted 2003-05-07 06:09 PM

Your time will come sooner or later. Great poem.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-05-25 04:27 AM

well done

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