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We Danced
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We Danced |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
When we touched under the watchful eye of the sun I knew something special had begun as I wrapped your body with my arms I knew I found someone I wanted to hold on to We danced to the music of lovers I got lost in your eyes as you lit a fire in me no one had ever made me feel this way I no longer had the desire to be free The music ended but our dance did not I held you against me, close as to can get you ran your fingers through my hair I thought I had gone to heaven when we kissed Such a sweet taste, the lightning hot sensations that wreaked havoc on my body and mind, taking my legs out from under me making me tremble from the inside out I found a reason to live that day You gave me my life back You gave me a place to belong You taught me how to love Now I just want to say one thing that I can’t seem to say enough I love you |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Alan, What a beautiful love letter. Thank you for sharing. -Patricia |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is very beautiful..... Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Aw, hope you gave this one to her. "I held you against me, close as to can get" BTW, was this to have read 'two' instead of to? |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* ohhhhhhh she will surely melt when she reads this wonderfully romantic poem...Beautiful and heartfelt writing, Alan... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh, this is so precious. And this the dead giveaway as to how true love works: "I no longer had the desire to be free" Love this, Hugs, Pat  |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Looks like the life inside your world is doing very nicely these days. I am soooooo happy for you dear friend. Now watch as the world lays unfurled before the two of you, step out, go and enjoy your lives. Best Wishes Always Alan! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Alan, you sure know how to melt a woman's heart! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Alan - now this is a dance for two... BC |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Aww. That says a lot of things I've thought before. And worded so originally. Nice work. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! loved this one |
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