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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-05-10 03:02 PM

It's here
in this dance
of senses and instinct
I feel the promise
of heaven

Life unravels
into nothingness
in locked eyes
in press of flesh
in soft moans
and whispered
words

Hearts entwined
beat in new rythm
music of the gods

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-05-10 03:04 PM

*smiling*

you know I adore this . . .

eyes locked . . .
amazingly sensual and passionate
Music of the Gods . . .
an understatement . . .

brilliant write Raph
(where are those keys . . . )

xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (05-10-2003 03:07 PM).]

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

2 posted 2003-05-10 03:09 PM

my mind is wandering..shame on you! jk..there are no words to describe the beauty of the spell you have just woven over my eyes and my heart..hrm..yeah whatever..ciao...*goes to her corner*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Trish Herrick
New Member

since 2003-05-09

Posts 8

3 posted 2003-05-10 04:10 PM

Raph,

This is sensual and lovely...well written and touching...I really love it...wish I could write with so few words and accomplish all you do....
This is Pat, Regards 2 You,..I switched to Trish Herrick, my other name in order to get all bells and whistles to work. Will probably only us this for replying..folders work, which is so important to me...guess my cookies crumble all the time with Regards2You and spend half an hour trying to get it to function properly..and it never does...Trish Herrick has colored folders...yea!

Hugs to you for a wonderful poem.

Pat/Trish

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-05-10 04:16 PM

Raph, this is wonderfully romantic. I love
this kind of dancing, friend.

Hugs,
Ethel

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

5 posted 2003-05-10 04:25 PM

Well written, as usual my friend.Envy the talent.

Jason

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-05-10 04:43 PM

Allora c'è qualcosa .... qualcuno .... che ti fa toccare il cielo con un dito!

Stupendo!
Abbracci, Margherita

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-05-10 09:54 PM

Thanks Sue keep looking for those keys

Thanks Kris what can I say

Thanks Pat, you're other name eh? I never would have pegged you for a multiple personality disorder

Ethel it's the only dancing..unless you count the funky chiken cause that's just cool

Jason my friend nothing to envy you have amazing talent

Margherita ancora no ma pure io posso sognare

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-05-11 03:46 AM

Oh . . . dont you worry . . . I will

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-05-11 03:56 AM

nice...really nice

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

10 posted 2003-05-11 11:16 AM

You might not know what to say but I do..*rated g*

lemme stop I'm sorry lack of a balanced diet and sleep etc etc etc has caused me to be a freak..well I gotta blame it on something don't I!?

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2003-05-11 11:24 AM

Very soft and sensual. enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2003-05-11 11:37 AM

Aenimal
A good write, enjoyed the read.

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

13 posted 2003-05-11 11:05 PM

I've never heard a musician that could
compare to the the music made between lovers

you captured it beautifully my friend
I look forward to more writing from you

- btw - I noticed a shift in mood as of late
I'm amazed & loving it - not that I dont enjoy the darker side, otherwise known as home - lmao -
enjoy the sun - you deserve it

. . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . .

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

14 posted 2003-05-12 12:06 PM

lol Sue talk talk

thanks Dixie

Kris i blame the powerlines

Thanks Chris

Sy glad you did

Dream i hadn't noticed a change.. it sure doesnt feel any different..sun hurts my eyes

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

15 posted 2003-05-12 03:00 AM

hmm mmmmm . . . what - ever

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