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Open Poetry #26

Him, My Pain Killer

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

0 posted 2003-05-10 12:58 PM

I love the way that you wipe the tears from my eyes,
And hold me close, whispering "please don’t cry",
When I feel like I have lost, everything,
Except for you, and the comfort you bring,
Something I cannot live without, I know its you,
If you weren’t here, Id be so lost and confused.
You help me out through my bad times like these,
When I feel so awful, and I just want to leave,
I guess I never realized how much you are there,
I guess I never realized how much you do care,
Now as long as I’m with you, well, as long as I live,
To you my trust, love and heart, all I shall give,
I love you, I want you, whom I cant live without,
The one person who erases my pain and my doubts.

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

1 posted 2003-05-10 01:04 AM

Nice

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2003-05-10 08:45 AM

Tender and sweet....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-05-10 07:53 PM

written well

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

brezee
Member

since 2003-06-02

Posts 140

4 posted 2003-06-06 05:19 AM

hey "J" i can really relate to this with my "mirage" or "collage" lol anyways, great read; i liked!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-06-07 02:17 PM

Janna:

if you have him - dont let go please
a rarity . . .

nice write
xxoo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-06-07 02:20 PM

very nice writing

Manth88
Junior Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 45
IL, USA

7 posted 2003-06-18 02:16 AM

Hey i like alot, great write.

!^*Manth88*^!

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