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kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2003-05-07 12:59 PM

I am not
a stray cat
whom you place
your stinking foot upon
for stroking purposes,
expecting to induce
an emotional high
by the mere fact of
your attentiveness

Slap you!

this stray
has its standards,

never mind the tiny fact
that it is purring for more

[This message has been edited by kaile (05-07-2003 01:01 AM).]

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-05-07 01:01 AM

HA! I really like this! hmm hmm

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-05-07 01:01 AM

Love introspection, especially when it is done with vision and humor! Excellent!

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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-05-07 07:29 AM

(chuckling).... Nice to read you again..and the touch of humor in this is both amusing and touching. I know this feeling...

nice work my friend.. nice work indeed.

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

4 posted 2003-05-07 10:38 AM

nicely done.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-05-07 10:41 AM

This stray
has its standards...

~*~

Bravo!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-07-2003 10:42 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-05-07 12:01 PM

kaile:

yes . . . like a hankie

well done - I relate to this much
xxoo

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-05-07 12:26 PM

Oh those are great standards...
a slap and a purrr~

Yep, felines are a fickle bunch!

Good stuff kaile~

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2003-05-07 12:30 PM

liked the read very much

Charisma

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

9 posted 2003-05-07 12:55 PM

Kaile,

About time you came back. Love this.
Such talent you have. Can't help but smile.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-05-07 01:10 PM

know what you mean, yep

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2003-05-07 05:09 PM

ROTFL.
I absolutely love your zany sense of humor.

PURR!!!!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2003-05-08 12:30 PM

now this. . . is totally you. . . not so above, yet, no so below. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

13 posted 2003-06-17 10:34 AM

Haha!!! I like the irony in this... Such a proud, indignant stray huh? What is pride when you can get all the strokes in the world?

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

topsyturveychick
Member

since 2003-01-19

Posts 57
Bris,QLD,Aus

14 posted 2003-06-18 12:05 PM

ROTFLMAO...this is a great poem. A very big clap to u and I'll be reading heaps more of your things.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**

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