Open Poetry #26 |
Princess of my Pain |
Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I remember looking in the mirror seeing us grow old together now the glass shatters and the jagged edges cut my bare feet I bleed rivers, oceans and soon grow faint and weak from loss of blood and sadness falling I remember how I gave so much to "us" I ripped my heart from my chest sold my soul to hell and if there was anything else I would have done that too to have you pretend the fairy tale of happy ever after but you struck me down with your harsh cold blade you used me again and again like some cheap vibrating sex toy bleeding me dry till I was less then human but you could not stop at that shattering everything until I became what you always wanted me to be an empty shell lying naked in Times Square bleeding, dying your masterpiece on display for all the world to see. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ouch! If this is written about you, I am so terribly sorry. How painful; how broken your heart is ... Huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you! |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
My only hope is that you still have hope and find the inspiration to go on... You have alot of things to say and you say it well. quatro |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God . . . you know when I read this my chest - it feels hollow . . . you are brilliant sorry you had to write but damn . . . xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I often times think that there is some indication of this in the early stages...recently I met a woman and I just got the feeling that she was the type of woman that would bring pain and suffering back into my life...I am moving very slow on this one...James |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you for reading! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Oh I know this woman, not the specific woman but this specific type.. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very,very powerful. Eric |
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