Open Poetry #26 |
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Consortium Two (A Trust) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
~**~ How well the kindle shares us As I open to your meadow, no longer lost Astonished at myself, amidst the trembled leaves The last thing to be thought of My feelings as my only shield Served warm to blossom in your hand There seems to be a lustrous thread And often when I close my eyes, it is for you An undelivered kiss recited to the wind The only purpose to be found A spread unguarded to be knelt Simple gifts, a penny for your thoughts And yet, ensnared I trip the wires Without a doubt to leave the ground For that is where the blind is hidden An un-relinquished spell The final resting in my heart Speechless, the fall that colors all By now, the question that remains unsaid As I walk within your steps still warm Beside the lake, a private space And I no longer fear the depths Each visiting so timelessly pristine Filled, in drops of you, the sea of me Copyright Kkh 5/7/03 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
For that is where the blind is hidden An un-relinquished spell Your poetry effects me in so many ways.... You know that already, right? Just beautiful, you~ |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, you know that I love all of your poetry. It's all so beautiful, snd this one is no exception. I especially love this last line.... Filled, in drops of you, the sea of me Heart Hugs, ![]() Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kathleen, For me, this one is the exception for it made my cry. So deep and so beautiful. Yes, this my favorite of yours thus far. Love your writing! Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are such an incredibly fine writer. You have the power to move mountains with your words... Warm hugs, EA |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
That's it... I'm going back to Poetry College... ThisDiamond (or if I may call you Kathleen?) Your writing is so inspiring! A beautiful style, I could only aspire to... I'm gonna go read some more of your poems! Simply In Awe! Richy |
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