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The Goddess
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The Goddess |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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oh mistress of the moon what tangled fate have you in store for me now weaving our lives with fragile yarn letting it sway in the wind she lets it slip from her grasp letting the string float afar such charisma such mystery moon goddess you inspire me watching over me leading me in the right direction letting fate take me home teaching me life's lessons I worship you everyday when I smell the fresh air or feel the rain on my face smiling in the moonlight or basking in the warming rays of your sun you are the mistress of life such beauty your mother Earth your the reflecetion of humanity your the power within me your the goddess that inspires me |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Talia, I love this. You've captured beautifully the importance of our Goddess, la luna  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Blessed be. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very beautiful. Eric |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I think you felt just right on this poem. And yes, the gods and goddesses of the world need us as we need them. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful write.  All writing comes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful work. . . a song to the Goddess. . . perfect. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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