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LastMoments
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0 posted 2003-06-02 08:03 PM



I still recall the falling tears
The echo of times I lost
The distant reminders
Of what I was
The scar you made
That paints memories
Inside my hopeless eyes

Find me
In my latest desperation
The constant dreams of you
Washing ashore to my mind
In the grains of sand
As I walk them delicately
I find the real you
I can't swallow what I see
I can't fake reality
I want to, but I can't

Let this cry rebirth
To the inner soul
In the back
My mind utters control
Lifting me helpless
As a puppet is made
Of me
I can't control the trajedy
I want to forget
This is everlasting
This is meant, to be.

Beyond anything I can have

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with you
1 posted 2003-06-02 08:33 PM


I love this... can relate well....
ParisGrl
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2 posted 2003-06-02 08:39 PM


I have been there......i know how this feels.  enjoyed the read.

~Laura~

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3 posted 2003-06-03 03:08 AM


I can relate....well done
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