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Ancient Shipwrecks
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22NICK22 Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 54 |
Ancient shipwrecks on the bays quiet side Waters dreary and wicked sands stand still Bodies float across the sea Misty morning clouds dirft off the water Ancient pirates and burried treasure The island of the dead The location of lost sailors Two ran wildly in search of life Like ghosts left the sands flawless Purple mountains and the moons cascade Nights black prisms have came and conquered Pirates have fallen asleep on aborted ships Both lay calmly with something never worth living for |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Ancient pirates and burried treasure The island of the dead The location of lost sailors Two ran wildly in search of life Like ghosts..." Great impressionistic images; good work. |
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22NICK22 Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 54 |
Hey icebox, Thanks for the comments, I really admire you and your work! Thanks! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great piece! I love the ending! |
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