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brian sites
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0 posted 2003-05-06 03:41 AM



I drape
   your
     syllables
   on you
(moaned)

my fingers curl
       (like lips from teeth)
around your
    hip
bones

thrust

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-05-06 03:43 AM


WOW !!!

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2003-05-06 03:45 AM


You?

are so intense.

You

are primordial.

You

are archetype

awaiting recognition.

(Iamyou.)

Youareme.


Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2003-05-06 10:45 AM


like lips from teeth...

great one...

regards,
sudhir

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
4 posted 2003-05-06 11:13 AM


what serenity said
Janet Marie
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5 posted 2003-05-06 11:47 AM


I drape
   your
     syllables
   on you
(moaned)
===================


whoa ... and ... whew


Janette
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6 posted 2003-05-06 10:56 PM


*smiling*

I like this!

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-05-06 11:05 PM


. . . backing away quietly
hmmm . . .  I plead the fifth . . .

awesome bri truly
xxoo

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-05-06 11:11 PM


Me too...what littlewing said...LOL
Hugs,
Ethel

littlewing
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9 posted 2003-05-07 08:37 PM


ok  . . . this one has to breathe again bri lol

[This message has been edited by littlewing (05-07-2003 08:38 PM).]

Startime55
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10 posted 2003-05-07 08:48 PM


WOW!!!Did this one ever take me by surprise...It also took my breath away...STUNNING!!!

ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2003-05-07 09:00 PM


Penetrating read!
Smiles from TD.

passing shadows
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displaced
12 posted 2003-05-25 04:24 AM


this is too hot!
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