Open Poetry #26 |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
I drape your syllables on you (moaned) my fingers curl (like lips from teeth) around your hip bones thrust |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
WOW !!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You? are so intense. You are primordial. You are archetype awaiting recognition. (Iamyou.) Youareme. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
like lips from teeth... great one... regards, sudhir |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
what serenity said |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I drape your syllables on you (moaned) =================== whoa ... and ... whew |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
*smiling* I like this! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . backing away quietly hmmm . . . I plead the fifth . . . awesome bri truly xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Me too...what littlewing said...LOL Hugs, Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ok . . . this one has to breathe again bri lol [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-07-2003 08:38 PM).] |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!!Did this one ever take me by surprise...It also took my breath away...STUNNING!!! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Penetrating read! Smiles from TD. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is too hot! |
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