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quatro
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0 posted 2003-05-02 12:32 PM



If a dream last only one night
and a daydream lasts only one day;
how much longer before the thought of you
begins to fade away?

quatro

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1 posted 2003-05-02 12:45 PM



Let the daydream...

...slip into the nightdream...

...and it will last forever.

CG

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2 posted 2003-05-02 12:49 PM


beautiful!
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3 posted 2003-05-02 01:32 PM


good write!!!  

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

quatro
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4 posted 2003-05-02 06:20 PM


Thanks you guys for reading my ramblings! Just another entry in my unkept and often neglected journal.

quatro

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5 posted 2003-05-25 04:26 AM


yeah
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