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Greater Longings Still
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Greater Longings Still |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We are joined to this greater longing. As the shore longs for a taste of what the ocean holds. As the ocean sends waves to kiss the shore. This is our dance. There are things that call to us from higher worlds. The moon has a pull giving rise to the liquid of our desires. The sun yearns in a touch so fierce...its very distance is required. Any closer...we would burn to this love. And stars are but farther suns that know this hunger well. This is our dance. We move in circles. Joined to greater longings still. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh my, but you are really beginning to be one of my favorite poets here. Fluid words, Eric. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (04-28-2003 04:54 PM).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Uhm hmmm.....Me likes!!!! Very nice!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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luvlorn322 Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 43 |
very sensual and emotive, thanks for sharing |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very, very exciting work. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Jager Junior Member
since 2003-04-27
Posts 12Event Horizon |
Beautifully simplistic. Nice work. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ This is LOVELY~ And this - 'As the shore longs for a taste of what the ocean holds.' is quite possibly the loveliest of thoughts that I've read this day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just wonderful Eric...as always!  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
*sighs* Lots of big *sighs*....  This is just simply wonderful, but then you have to remember who you're talking to. Miss Mermaid herself, so of COURSE I love this! *sighs again!* |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Aaaahhh... this is just incredibly beautiful. Words to express this beauty don't exist in any language. I LOVE your magic words! You are a wonderful blessing filled with a sacred gift. We are lucky that you so love to share! You are truly amazing... thank you. I love you, Moca |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc....This is a beautiful love poem!!! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this is absolutely beautiful.... And this, you know from my love poems that I relate to... The moon has a pull giving rise to the liquid of our desires My Honey-Love and I love the moon and ths stars...  Hugs, Ethel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A song of love -- beautiful! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
flowing beautiful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This dance holds magic and mystery ... Such beauty you share! Love, Margherita |
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