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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I spent last night with the stars… they played tag and then changed whimsically to hide and seek, then led me, in a whispered giggle, as we winked toward the Archer, who had the bear in his sights, then up and away onto Orion’s belt, then peeked below… my hand traced the lion’s head, and in stride, the stars and I stopped to play catch with Sirius, who barked in gay enjoyment of the heavens, as I tripped over spring’s nightlights, toward dawn. I held on intimately to the hungry morning star, all shimmer and real, then stair-stepped myself back down off the clouds, come back to join the stars, and came off the imagination of a dreamer, into the sincerity of the redbird’s song, the town’s rooster of daybreak, it seems, who herded me back to bed, to awake, in wonder. If the dog barks tonight, you’ll know where to find me. [This message has been edited by Lady In White (05-05-2003 04:40 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
a very nice write, i love the stars at nite, or seen a shooting star streaking across the dark night sky, with twinkling stars winking as it passes by. It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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MysticDreamer Member
since 2003-04-21
Posts 131 |
Beautifully Expressed. The Stars inspire my Poetry and Influence my Dreams as well. Thanks for sharing this. Good Will Always, Mystic Dreamer "Standing under moonbeams Looking over mars Inward, dreams curving Outward to the stars Exploring lost cultures Through ancient avenues Cascading worlds of color Illuminating views Above, a heavenly vision Beyond, a celestial chart Within, the opening passage Returning to the Sacred Heart" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah dear Lady... So good to see you here today!! And..you have not lost your magic touch I see. A beautiful look into the night sky through your eyes. Please don't stay away so long. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Absolutely loved it! I'd like to join you some night and we can fly to the most amazing places in this Universe--and beyond!  Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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davidmerriman Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 123Dallas, TX |
very giddy. you did well. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is surely an inspiring poem, very well done Lady...Very well done.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My oh my....look at you...all starstuck and we are the lucky benefactors... Lady, lady...I must say...you look lovely with the stars in your eyes  Mind if I keep this one? ... thank you so much  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I liked this one alot  I love night time, its so peaceful and calm.. nothing like looking up at the stars and getting lost for a few hours Tara |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
The stars at night Are big and bright Sane guideposts in a zany world. Nicejob. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful sweet Lady! Good to read your work once again. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Lady.. this is simply gorgeous...you don't mind if I keep this do you? adding to my library. Maree |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
a beautiful call to star gazers! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
move over my friend. . .I brought some paper, ink, and a red flashlight. . . looking here with you is like seeing with new and open eyes. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
simply amazing..celestial..enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Let me guess, you've been up there in the second star to the right that goes straight ont the morning today? (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, how is Andromeda out there, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Every single night there is a clear sky I look for a "particular star" and I am never dissappointed in the dreams following that exercise. I loved this one, but then you knew I would didn't you? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
big smile comes across my face |
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